La caresse du soirée

October 17, 2011
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Night is ever so lonesome
For although I'd like to embrace the darkness with you
We are diverged by an entire nation of separation
And you are basking in the glorious sun,
While the moon's soft light feebly attempts
To fill the gap between our yearning hearts.

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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 2:19 pm
I like this. The title's really pretty, too. Especially after I read your translation :) Think you could check out my work sometime?
jshawts replied...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 3:44 pm
Thank you! And of course :)
AbstractFragment This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 2:15 pm
I like it, which is something I say very rarely. Although I think the first three lines perhaps need a little more stops, other than that I loved this. Can I ask what the title translates to?
Jasmine S. replied...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:27 pm
Why thank you! I'm honoured :) and yeah, I'll work on them. And of course, it means "Evening's kiss" :)
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