October 16, 2011
By Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
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I had a vision,
I had a dream

I’m in a field
There is a girl
Something’s strange
I walk to the girl
There’s blood on her dress
Blood in a pool
Under her
Seeping from a wound
There was a knife
Now it’s gone
I see my face in her’s
I turn around
I see a man
With the knife
With her blood
Dripping off the tip
He looks at the knife
Then at me
He smiles
I try to scream
But I can’t
He raises the knife

I had a vision
I had a dream
And I am going to

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on Dec. 4 2011 at 9:49 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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I'm a bit confused about the end though I guess she couldn't finish her thought because she died. Am I right? I like how your poems are stories but they're always so sad it seems!!!!! :(

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