My Home

October 17, 2011
By Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
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I lay in a field
Miles away from home
Hidden away behind
The tall grass
And flowers

I love to spend my days
Surrounded by the earth
Taking it all in

Soaking in the sun,
Hearing the whispers
Of the wind,
The presence of
The souls yet
To leave to earth

I get lost
In the clouds,
Taken away
By the smells

This is how
I spend my days
In a home away from home

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on Dec. 3 2011 at 5:09 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Wow, This is absolutely beautiful. I like the stanza "I get lost/ In the coulds/ Taken away/ By the smells." Great work, Five stars! Do you think you could look at a few of my works?  Perhaps you'd like Lonely Fires, that one is anonymous on accedent, though so you'd have to search.

on Oct. 19 2011 at 7:57 pm
tr3bl3grrl SILVER, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Fascinating. I am being possessed by unspeakable evil." --Tweek, Avalon #7
OR... "THE HUNKY-DORY THING ZAPPED ME!!" --Trunko, Ugly Doll Show.

awesome! keep writing! check out my stuff. :)

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