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my mask of laughter
underneath my tears
my mask of happiness
underneath my sadness
my mask...
that's all you see
why?
because that's all I want you to see...
why?
because i know that you won't understand...
because I'm too afraid to show you the truth.
why?
because the only thing you'll tel me is to suck it up...
my mask...
it hides ME
it hides my fear
my pain
my sadness...
...from those who JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND!


-lone wolf



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 6:11 am:

Great poem, very well-written as well as beautifully sad... if that makes any sense. I love it.

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wolfie69524 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:53 am :
sure I will, and thanks it dose make sence.
 
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Diamond_Tears. said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 8:35 pm:
Wow. its as if you just looked into my soul. And those who say they are perfect, and that They themselves dont have a mask, there wrong. Every one has a secret side and i think its time we let Us out.  Let the world see us for who we are. like it or not. Beatiful poem.
 
wolfie69524 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:54 am :
thank you and you are very right. it is time we show the world who we really are.
 
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DaY_DrEaMeR8 said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 5:12 pm:
i really love this poem..!
 
wolfie69524 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:55 am :
thank you.
 
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DylanRock said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 12:00 pm:
Really liked this, I know hat you mean.
 
darius thomas replied...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 2:02 pm :
i really like this poem a lot
 
wolfie69524 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:56 am :

thank you.

 

 
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