October 7, 2011
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We live in this world of blind hate,
filled with mirrors, no true image,
Just the deceitful reflection of what we want to see.
A recollection of time, how its changed from the past,
Empty words, Unintended promises, Unfulfilled dreams.
The past is a reflection of our future, like a face in water.
One ripple threatening to break the perfection that is ignorance.
Smooth once again, the waters edge reflects the million untold lies on your lips, all the words left unsaid, a different age, a different time.
Crystal blue waters blind the innocent eyes, ignorant from the hurt felt world around them. Eyes wise beyond their years, blind, yet you've seen so much more than the reflected lies indoctrinating my world.

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JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 6:13 pm
....i dont know how to describe this poem. All i can say is 5/5
Dreammer said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:13 pm
I loved it please check out mine and comment :)
MarieLouiseA replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 1:09 pm
Will do! (:
Desti_B replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:03 pm

i like it question do u get vip by ur name??


Dreammer replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 9:41 pm
Good question? I wanna know now too
Desti_B replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 3:54 pm
O.o lol...u didn't before?? lol..well when u find out lemmi know :) 
Dreammer replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 8:34 pm
I didn't even know I had a VIP :) you have one tooo haha but if you hit someone's VIP square thingy it explains it somthing about contributing to the site alot
Desti_B replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:41 pm

lol...yea i saw it...i joined like 2 weeks ago...i have no idea how i have one lol..


Dreammer replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Your just special :)
Desti_B replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:47 pm
*blush* lol...well i'd like to think
Dreammer replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:56 pm
Lol you are don't worry
Dreammer replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:58 pm
:P don't worry you are
Emmy88 said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 6:32 pm

Really great piece! Really deep. Check out my work if you can! Thnx


MarieLouiseA replied...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 1:09 pm
Thank you! (: will do
Chibi-Alexis said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 7:31 am
No, go ahead.  My work is for all your eyes and I would love for you to read my work!
Chibi-Alexis said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:35 am
I really think you have a talent for writing and we have a similar view of people and the way we are naturally.
MarieLouiseA replied...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 8:00 am
Thanks! (: i can only write when im upset about something though... or proper happy y'know like strong emotions :L yeah, when i really think about it, it kind of scares me (: would you mind me checking some of your work out?
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