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Gone,
Erased,
Vanished,
Replaced.
Only one, but
Not unique
Others will come
Others will take
Others will become me,
When I am gone,
When I’m pushed on,
When I’m no more.





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yazigirl said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 4:43 pm
i really like this. it was very good, and although short very well writen!
 
Blue4indigo replied...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 8:37 pm
Thank you!
 
Miranda_K. said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:12 am
It was kind of short but the message was clear and powerful
 
Blue4indigo replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:50 pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my pieces!
 
Miranda_K. replied...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 9:56 pm
It's no problem. I love your work ^-^
 
Blue4indigo replied...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 2:25 pm
I'm really glad you do, it means a lot
 
AmayaSakaruta said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 11:20 am
i dont unerstand all of it, but that's the mark of good poetry. it holds the most value for you, and everyone else sees it differently and attaches different value to it...i think you did a good job expressing yourself. SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION! could you pretty please look at some of my poetry, and give feedback?
 
Blue4 replied...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Thank you, and sure, I'll look at your work when I have more time :)
 
theunimaginable said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 9:32 am
I like this a lot.
 
Blue4 replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 3:45 pm
Thank you!
 
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