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Simple

Theories and philosophies,
Spilling at the seams
Pretend to be put together
But succeeding at no means,
Sitting and observing
I guess you’re a bit like me,
Finally someone makes sense
That should be plain to see.



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TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 12:24 pm
Gosh, i ouhta stop smiling before I hurt myself. I think the line "But succeding at no means" was a little odd, probabaly should have used the word "by" as opposed to at. Other than That, i was delighted! I like this, it is simple like the name, at least in the air and rhymes of it if not subject, and somehow reminds me of myself. Great work!
 
YellowRose79 replied...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 6:18 pm
Thank you for the advice! :)
 
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