Alone in the world

October 7, 2011
By Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3


Alone in the world,
Nobody cares.
There is a girl,
Who cries for help.
Her cuts help her heal,
And her tears help her sleep.
She reaches out,
But falls.
With nothing to grasp,
And nobody to help.
She finds herself falling,
To her death.
She feels so alone,
She's always afraid.
It's amazing...
How a place can be so big,
Yet she has nobody.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 12 comments.


on Mar. 30 2014 at 9:27 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

I'm sorry to hear that

on Mar. 30 2014 at 9:26 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank you(:

on Dec. 10 2013 at 12:43 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank you. And I'm sorry that you had to go through the same thing, it sucks, but you're never alone. Remember that. 

on Dec. 10 2013 at 11:24 am
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

i really get this poem, considering i went through the same thing, its very well written

writish said...
on Dec. 5 2013 at 4:19 pm
writish, Ann Arbor, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'When your life sucks, do something about it' ~Me

It is. I can relate to it too.

on Dec. 4 2013 at 5:16 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback(:

on Dec. 4 2013 at 5:11 pm
themajesticpoet BRONZE, Bloomington, Other
1 article 0 photos 14 comments
Its pretty sad, but great!

on Dec. 4 2013 at 5:03 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thanks!(:  It's sad, though, that so many people can relate. 

writish said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 4:37 pm
writish, Ann Arbor, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'When your life sucks, do something about it' ~Me

I really like this piece, not only because I can relate to it, but because, especially at the beginning, the soud and rhythm really click with me. In the middle, my connection with it fades a little, but overall, it is very good. Keep it up!

on Jun. 5 2013 at 6:21 pm
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
14 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

so sadly true for so many people... but good job (:  

on May. 29 2013 at 7:07 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thankssss(: and okay

on May. 15 2012 at 4:39 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Aaaaawh. Sad. I like it a lot, but could use some editing here and there to help it flow better. Ps. Please check out my work


Parkland Book