Alone in the world

October 7, 2011
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Alone in the world,
Nobody cares.
There is a girl,
Who cries for help.
Her cuts help her heal,
And her tears help her sleep.
She reaches out,
But falls.
With nothing to grasp,
And nobody to help.
She finds herself falling,
To her death.
She feels so alone,
She's always afraid.
It's amazing...
How a place can be so big,
Yet she has nobody.

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Joob-Stache said...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 12:43 pm
Thank you. And I'm sorry that you had to go through the same thing, it sucks, but you're never alone. Remember that. 
angel_of_silence said...
Dec. 10, 2013 at 11:24 am
i really get this poem, considering i went through the same thing, its very well written
Alldayshufflin said...
Dec. 4, 2013 at 5:11 pm
Its pretty sad, but great!
Joob-Stache replied...
Dec. 4, 2013 at 5:16 pm
Thank you! I appreciate your feedback(:
writish said...
Dec. 1, 2013 at 4:37 pm
I really like this piece, not only because I can relate to it, but because, especially at the beginning, the soud and rhythm really click with me. In the middle, my connection with it fades a little, but overall, it is very good. Keep it up!
Joob-Stache replied...
Dec. 4, 2013 at 5:03 pm
Thanks!(:  It's sad, though, that so many people can relate. 
writish replied...
Dec. 5, 2013 at 4:19 pm
It is. I can relate to it too.
Joob-Stache replied...
Mar. 30, 2014 at 9:27 am
I'm sorry to hear that
liberalartist said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 6:21 pm
so sadly true for so many people... but good job (:  
Joob-Stache replied...
Mar. 30, 2014 at 9:26 am
Thank you(:
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15, 2012 at 4:39 pm
Aaaaawh. Sad. I like it a lot, but could use some editing here and there to help it flow better. Ps. Please check out my work
Poetry4Ever replied...
May 29, 2013 at 7:07 pm
Thankssss(: and okay
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