Seattle

The problem with any poem geographically based is that its not interesting to people who aren't from their or don't have any connections with that place. 

It's a good poem, but if you want to catch everyone's interest, and not just people who like Seattle, make some metaphors, be creative with your writing style, throw in sme glitter and slap a bow on it. An over dressed commoner makes a better impression than just a regular commoner.