Knight

October 11, 2011
By Sanjana Chetia BRONZE, Saratoga, California
Sanjana Chetia BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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In a white knuckled grip,
His broadsword glistens
Unsheathed yet unstained.
A mask of snow, his face
Holds no ruddy bloodlust.
Still, obsidian eyes smolder
With repressed fury as he
Waits to join the wild fray.


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on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:25 pm
Raven Sisco BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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Gorgeous imagery. I love "mask of snow" and "obsidian eyes." (:

dishajh BRONZE said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:15 pm
dishajh BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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Wow, great imagery of the knight. I would not want to face his wrath...

syk0130 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:08 pm
syk0130 BRONZE, Saratoga, California
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ooh I really like "unsheathed yet unstained", definitely has that tension in it

Amador said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:01 pm
Amador, Saratoga, California
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I like the lines

"A mask of snow, his face

Holds no ruddy bloodlust."

That really sets a good contrast when you introduce obsidian eyes.



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