Knight

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In a white knuckled grip,
His broadsword glistens
Unsheathed yet unstained.
A mask of snow, his face
Holds no ruddy bloodlust.
Still, obsidian eyes smolder
With repressed fury as he
Waits to join the wild fray.





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Raven S. said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 7:25 pm
Gorgeous imagery. I love "mask of snow" and "obsidian eyes." (:
 
dishajh said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 7:15 pm
Wow, great imagery of the knight. I would not want to face his wrath...
 
syk0130 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 7:08 pm
ooh I really like "unsheathed yet unstained", definitely has that tension in it
 
Amador said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 7:01 pm

I like the lines

"A mask of snow, his face

Holds no ruddy bloodlust."

That really sets a good contrast when you introduce obsidian eyes.

 
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