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Driving on the open road
on our way home,
in the middle of the night
and the stars are bright,
Three of us kids
asleep in the back seat
maybe there's a bump
and I'm awake in a heart beat.
Just me and the driver
but he doesn't even see me
everyone else
is still just dreaming.
I sit up for a bit and stretch my elbow
pull up my blanket
and rest my head on the window
I got nothing to do
and time to pass
I look at the stars
and think and relax
because it's all so beautiful
all I need is to look at it
I can stare until until dawn
I'm a majesty addict.



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Dreamer_ said...
Mar. 28 at 10:59 pm:
The nostalgia is strong here. I love it!
 
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Alixchica66 said...
Jun. 30, 2012 at 7:18 pm:
Hey, mike :) this poem reminds me a lot of when i was younger and used to stare out at the sky on nighttime drives. Good work
 
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MissKrissyKat said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 11:39 pm:
This is really good. I love it! It reminds me of how I was in a car at night.
 
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EmoAngel18 said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:14 pm:
I loved looking up at the midnight sky, most of the time i get my ideas just from looking up at the sky
 
Mike6546 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 4:02 pm :
Thank for the all of the comments, I appreciate getting nice feedback. 
 
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CountryCutie said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:08 pm:
loved this, read it with my sister she didnt get it but i loved it:)
 
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pinkowlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 11:18 pm:
antastic, just wonderful! i love this. i love how it flows, and how i can picture myself in the backseat as a child. i love how you took a moment in your past and made it so beautiful!
 
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