Stars At Night

October 10, 2011
By Mike6546 SILVER, North Carolina, North Carolina
Mike6546 SILVER, North Carolina, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
those who mind don\'t matter and those who matter don\'t mind


Driving on the open road
on our way home,
in the middle of the night
and the stars are bright,
Three of us kids
asleep in the back seat
maybe there's a bump
and I'm awake in a heart beat.
Just me and the driver
but he doesn't even see me
everyone else
is still just dreaming.
I sit up for a bit and stretch my elbow
pull up my blanket
and rest my head on the window
I got nothing to do
and time to pass
I look at the stars
and think and relax
because it's all so beautiful
all I need is to look at it
I can stare until until dawn
I'm a majesty addict.


The author's comments:
Remember as a kid being asleep in the car while driving home late at night? I still remember loving to stare at the stars.

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on Mar. 28 2014 at 10:59 pm
Dreamer_ SILVER, Milton On, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all mad here" ~ Cheshire Cat

"Whats your dream?"
"To go, away." ~ Surfs Up.

The nostalgia is strong here. I love it!

on Jun. 30 2012 at 7:18 pm
Alixchica66 SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Oh, so you have enemies? Good, that means you've stood up for something you believe in." -Marshall Mathers

Hey, mike :) this poem reminds me a lot of when i was younger and used to stare out at the sky on nighttime drives. Good work

on Apr. 6 2012 at 11:39 pm
MissKrissyKat BRONZE, Peebles, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I don't need no one's help cause i can bless myself, no one else can help, but me, myself, and I!

This is really good. I love it! It reminds me of how I was in a car at night.

on Dec. 11 2011 at 4:02 pm
Mike6546 SILVER, North Carolina, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
those who mind don\'t matter and those who matter don\'t mind

Thank for the all of the comments, I appreciate getting nice feedback. 

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:14 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

I loved looking up at the midnight sky, most of the time i get my ideas just from looking up at the sky

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:08 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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loved this, read it with my sister she didnt get it but i loved it:)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 11:18 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

antastic, just wonderful! i love this. i love how it flows, and how i can picture myself in the backseat as a child. i love how you took a moment in your past and made it so beautiful!


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