Sunset

The Sun rises from the East
Bright and burning
A ball of fire in the sky
12 hours, high noon
Burning down on the world
Liquid being sucked from life
Six in the night, fright of eternal darkness
The Sun comes from the East
And sets on the West





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mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:34 pm
Something about this poem really intrigued me. I feel it's written wonderfully.
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 9:49 pm

I don't know how to explain how I like this poem , but it seems to have a deeper meaning to it than what I read Great job!

5/5

 
WritingAllDay replied...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 9:48 pm
Thank you very much.
 
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