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"God Bless America"

The lives we lost,
The seconds that passed,
As their heartbeats slowed and then
Stopped, Altogether.
The tears that were shed,
The grief that was felt,
Darkness fell upon us.
As the caskets were closed
We watched with our sullen faces,
As they were lowered into the ground,
Never to be seen again,
Though their presence was felt all around.
We looked at their smiling faces,
On photographs that filled the house,
Cried again and again,
But tried to act strong,
We felt broken, but piece by piece,
We found ourselves,
and rose to a new beginning,
A fresh start,
Though the pain never left us,
We rose,
We rose, and put our hand on our hearts,
and said,
"God Bless America"




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AyeshaLiveLaughLove said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 12:56 pm:

Thank you so much!  It's really nice of you to take time and review my work :)

Keep me updated on your work!

-Ayesha

 
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Chibi_DanniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 8:00 pm:

that is what true patriotism is...if only kids today would understand that...if only, if only....i love this article...it really is a base of inspiration!

keep writing,

-Danni

 
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Ayesha V. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 2:59 pm:
Feel free to comment!  I would love your feedback :)
 
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