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Finger-like tendrils of tempting light dancing,
skin licking wistfully at the warmth
eyes closing, frost melting off eyelashes,
and for a moment too short, she lived.
For a moment, she lived outside the window.



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ChrisJThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 8 at 3:53 pm:
Very moving and well-done, great job!
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27 at 1:22 am:
This is good! I like it!
 
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