Bond,Forever Strong.

October 11, 2011
By Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.


You're in a better place,
Up there in Heaven.
With no more pains and aches,
You're just chillin'.
You're with our Lord,
Jesus Christ.
Down here you're dead,
But in Heaven you're alive.
And though it pains us,
To see you go,
We need to remember,
And need to know,
That we will see you agian,
In a whole new life.
And untill then,
God will help us be alright.
Nancy,
you'll always be in our hearts,
And nothing,
can tear that bond apart.


The author's comments:
I wrote this as a kind of letter to my close friend I lost,and I believe every word of it. No matter how hard life is, we'll get through it. We just gotta stay strong. :)

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on May. 17 2012 at 8:06 am
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not surprised, it's just kinda suprising." -me

Okay, I said I'd give you feedback for commenting on my poem, I just never got around to it. I LOVE this poem, it speaks the truth! Your friend is certainly up there with God now, in a much better place. Keep up the good work! : D

on May. 9 2012 at 8:32 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

You are very welcome!!:)

on May. 8 2012 at 12:59 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Thank you very much. :) 

on May. 7 2012 at 7:55 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

This is beautiful and true. It is also sad too. It is good that you and others think like this. Great job!

on May. 4 2012 at 9:28 am
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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creative, but so sad, but i agree i like the optimism its short and sweet poem on a sensitive topic

Rayne GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 1:53 pm
Rayne GOLD, Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin
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I really like the optimistic tone of the poem, instead of a depressing death kind. And the line "You're just chillin with our Lord, Jesus Christ"

on Nov. 6 2011 at 1:42 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 186 comments

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Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

I love how you show the hope given through God that awaits us after death. I really love your work :)

on Oct. 17 2011 at 3:00 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

I love this because even though its about death, it gives hope to it =) great work!

on Oct. 13 2011 at 8:06 am
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Thank you very much. :) I know what it's like to lose loved ones. I'm blessed to still have my parents, but I've lost my grandpa and lots of close friends. Things get better, we just gotta keep our chins up. Thanks for the comment! :)

on Oct. 12 2011 at 10:08 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

This has to be one of my favorites on Teen Ink. I lost my dad and I to believe every word. Very very amazing poem. 5/5 stars and tagged as my favorite :)




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