Galaxy

October 9, 2011
By hobo12321 PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
hobo12321 PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
20 articles 11 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
none, there's too many, although the one about the grapefruit is good. Any by Douglas Adams


You’re a black hole in my universe
of bright stars and
changing planets
You’re the one dark thing that everything else –
Ignores
Yet you manage to pull on me
You’re pulling me! The
air; from my body, The
blood; from my veins, The
thoughts; from my head, My
heart; from my chest!
My soul.
Sucking me down until
I’m lost in you



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on Oct. 30 2011 at 12:41 pm
hobo12321 PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
20 articles 11 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
none, there's too many, although the one about the grapefruit is good. Any by Douglas Adams

Thanks!! I already commented on your article, but I really liked it!

on Oct. 30 2011 at 12:08 pm
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't help others, if you yourself need help" -my sister ;) love it!

aww, I don't know why, but I think that that is just soo cute ;)  I'mma read your other works.... awesome job!!!  it just makes sooo much sense when You write it!! :D

on Oct. 12 2011 at 10:48 am
I love this, I can so relate! I know this might sound weird but this poem is so.... poetic haha :) its so dramatic




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