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October 8, 2011
You could be the death of me,

although that is quite alright,

for you see the key to my heart,
doubles as a knife

for all my feeble words and such would be trite,
if I too did not bet on them, my life.


You are my flaw,
the hole in my armor where your love dwells,
by my breast to keep my love in thaw,
while the rest of me becomes subject to freezing spells.

Out of my scars I made you a nest,
and the home you found
in the heat in my chest,
ensured I would always be around

when you need me best.
I am there, a wandering giant,
always moving, never at rest,
yet ever reliant

for you, I shall never cease
the one constant, to my many caprice

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Jasmine S. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 11:26 pm
I loved this! I can really relate to the turmoil of emotions that you're undergoing. Great job!:)
shelbi220 said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 5:30 pm

is is really good!! I can deffinetly relate to it....

can you check out some of my work please??(: although I have one pending right now...

RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 4:39 pm
I really like this it makes you think a lot about relationships, my favorite line is, "for you see the key to my heart, doubles as a knife" theres no better way to describe that =)
Kev-Girl said...
Oct. 16, 2011 at 6:40 am
oh wow! WHen I first read the title I was not very interested, but I read it anyway. Now I'm glad I did! Because this is really great! I love the concept,and the way everything rhymed. It was simply marvalous,darling. lol 5/5 stars!
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