Prayer for Help

October 6, 2011
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder


I don't know what's right
I don't know what to do
The only thing that is real now
Is You

Show me the path
Show me the way
Give me hope to go on
Just one more day

The sin traps me here
Help me know wrong from right
Give me wisdom to deprive
Satan of his delight.

Be there when they leave
Teach me, love me
There's a bright side to this
If you'll show it to me

-Amen


The author's comments:
Praying for help.. alot of it xD

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on Feb. 8 2012 at 11:57 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

This was so great---exactly what God is all about. He didn't promise days without pain, but when you have lost your way, He will be by your side. I enjoyed reading this. Well done!

on Oct. 29 2011 at 1:17 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Awwww, gorgeous!

on Oct. 24 2011 at 11:25 am
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

Wow that comment made my day =) to know that you enjoyed my poem even if you dont share the same beliefs as me, thats pretty awesome =D thank you!

on Oct. 23 2011 at 5:37 pm
xEmmiiix BRONZE, East Meadow, New York
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Personally Im not a christian however, I think this poem is beautifully written. The line breaks are perfect. The word order is awesome!!! <3 Well done! 5 stars!!!

Little.Miss said...
on Oct. 19 2011 at 5:12 pm
I love this. I'm a Christian too, and it's nice to see there are other Christians out there, unashamed of our Lord!

on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:38 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Oh wow! This is very good! I thought it was very sweet, and I love it! 5/5!




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