Never-Ending Night

We’re all just a part of this nonchalant game,
Plotting revenge, explosives, propane.
Pretending to love and have no shame
All the while, we’re going insane.

Walking in reverse, to the beat of their drum,
Never reaching anywhere, things left undone,
Pouring our hearts out , to those who use,
Becoming so prone, used to abuse.

Hoping for a time, with much more light,
Awaiting in the darkness, on this never-ending night.





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ILOVEYOU1234 said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 7:26 pm
Awh thank you guys so much. I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I've been sort of busy. I will be posting more poems shortly, and i'll be sure to check out your guys' work!(:
 
Me.Myself.and.I said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:20 pm
All I can say is WOW! keep up writing poems because your are seriously good at it! My favorite line is "Awaiting in the darkness, on this never-ending night." Its breathtaking! If you get a chance read my personal experience, short story... I need some critiqueing.... :) Thanks! I can't wait until your next post! Consider me a follower :) 
 
Speedyloris said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 9:23 pm

This is a rad poem. Keep it up!

 

 
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