Never-Ending Night

September 22, 2011
By ILOVEYOU1234 SILVER, Webb City, Missouri
ILOVEYOU1234 SILVER, Webb City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly"
-Sam Keen


We’re all just a part of this nonchalant game,
Plotting revenge, explosives, propane.
Pretending to love and have no shame
All the while, we’re going insane.

Walking in reverse, to the beat of their drum,
Never reaching anywhere, things left undone,
Pouring our hearts out , to those who use,
Becoming so prone, used to abuse.

Hoping for a time, with much more light,
Awaiting in the darkness, on this never-ending night.

The author's comments:
I realize this isn't a great piece of literature.
I've gone through a lot with relationships this last year, and poetry really helps me vent it all out.

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on Nov. 20 2011 at 7:26 pm
ILOVEYOU1234 SILVER, Webb City, Missouri
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly"
-Sam Keen

Awh thank you guys so much. I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I've been sort of busy. I will be posting more poems shortly, and i'll be sure to check out your guys' work!(:

on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:20 pm
Me.Myself.and.I BRONZE, South Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.




- Ralph Waldo Emerson

All I can say is WOW! keep up writing poems because your are seriously good at it! My favorite line is "Awaiting in the darkness, on this never-ending night." Its breathtaking! If you get a chance read my personal experience, short story... I need some critiqueing.... :) Thanks! I can't wait until your next post! Consider me a follower :) 

on Oct. 23 2011 at 9:23 pm
Speedyloris GOLD, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, everyone else is already taken"

This is a rad poem. Keep it up!

 



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