Million Times Better

October 2, 2011
By turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
‎"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
— Dr. Seuss

"Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it." --Confucius


Seeing the world as a
sand box,
will always be a
Million
times better than seeing it as a
filing cabinet.

Using finger paints to
express feelings,
will always be a
Million
times better than using
The Finger.



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on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:42 am
turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
‎"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
— Dr. Seuss

"Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it." --Confucius

Thanks :) Yea, that does make sense. I did have another stanza in there but my teacher didn't like it so I took it out...

on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:35 am
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

I like the idea of the poem, but I do have a couple things to say. One, I think it might flow a bit better if you wrote it like this; 

 

Seeing the world 

As a sand box, 

Will always be 

A million times better 

Than seeing it as 

A filing cabinet. 

 

Get what I mean? Another thing would be that I think the poem could be longer. But it's really good! I love the last stanza! haha great job!



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