GreenEyesWho

October 2, 2011
By KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.
- Bill Cosby


Green eyes who is tinged in red
And seems to see more
Who is whisper blown promises
And fingertip touches
Whose cheeks are engraved with joy
Is there no matter what
Who tells me in German
“Iche Liebe Dich”
Who need not whisper anything in English
But still does
Whose mending love has saved me
I could talk to all day
Keeps in his mind all that is right
Who sees me for what I am
Is wonderful
Is a walk on a sunsetting Corpus beach
Who believes in a forever “You and Me”
Is long talks and dark buses
And relentless tickling
Who sings taylor swift at 3 am
Over and over and over
Is the maker of who I am
Asking who could not love you
who could not love you, who?



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KelliB GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 9:59 am
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.
- Bill Cosby

Thank You!

Masey400 GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 7:55 pm
Masey400 GOLD, Ribera, New Mexico
16 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being well-dressed is not a matter of having expensive clothes or the 'right clothes. I don't care if you're wearing rags, but they must suit you."












Louise Nelson

This is beautiful. I love the way you compared him to "a walk on a sunsetting Corpus beach."

KelliB GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 12:06 pm
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.
- Bill Cosby

Please comment so I can get some constructive criticism. But even if not, thank you so much for reading!




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