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Green eyes who is tinged in red
And seems to see more
Who is whisper blown promises
And fingertip touches
Whose cheeks are engraved with joy
Is there no matter what
Who tells me in German
“Iche Liebe Dich”
Who need not whisper anything in English
But still does
Whose mending love has saved me
I could talk to all day
Keeps in his mind all that is right
Who sees me for what I am
Is wonderful
Is a walk on a sunsetting Corpus beach
Who believes in a forever “You and Me”
Is long talks and dark buses
And relentless tickling
Who sings taylor swift at 3 am
Over and over and over
Is the maker of who I am
Asking who could not love you
who could not love you, who?



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KelliBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 12:06 pm:
Please comment so I can get some constructive criticism. But even if not, thank you so much for reading!
 
Masey400 replied...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 7:55 pm :
This is beautiful. I love the way you compared him to "a walk on a sunsetting Corpus beach."
 
KelliBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17, 2013 at 9:59 am :
Thank You!
 
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