Backwards Mirrors

October 2, 2011
Your eyes tell more than your mouth.
Speaking harrowing truths.
Mind meets words.
Deathly adjectives.
Scorning nouns.
Your eyes are backwards mirrors.
Reflecting your each and every thought.
Meaningful pleas for love.
Not caring which.
Desperate lies fighting my hate.
I can't love you.
Your soul is pure.
Your eyes show it.
Mine tell novels of loathing.
Two opposite characters,
looking into backwards mirrors.

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Aginger said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 1:57 pm
Wow this is great. It has some wonderful imagery and the idea behind eyes as backwards mirrors is very original and so true! Nice job!
samiasaskia24 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 8:00 pm
The poem is so rich! I really like it!!!! It's amazing!
Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 3:19 pm
I really like the idea of backward mirrors, it's very unique. good job and keep writing!
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 10:47 pm
 I guess you're right, the eyes do show a lot, its beautifully written though, good job =)
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