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Judgemental People

By , montebello, CA
You people are so judgemental
in everything that you do."Don't judge a book by it's cover.", I'm ashamed to be one of you.The things that you do and the thing's that you say get me really mad. I used to think bad of you but know I've just given up. Any emotion that I see on your face i think it's really fake and sad, because you think that your so flawless but please i know your wrong.So let me ask you one question can you see the truth?





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Little.Miss said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 8:03 pm

I'm very confused. This has potential, but is poorly written. Try revising a few times, and editing it once or twice, to see what you're really capable of. Take some time to polish it up, and make something good of it! It's more fun to read well-written, revised and polished work than it is to read rough drafts that don't make very much sense.

Good luck and keep writing! :)

 
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