The Wind's Whisper

September 27, 2011
By Kay... BRONZE, London, Other
Kay... BRONZE, London, Other
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not accomplished when reaching the Destination, it is the journey that creates success.


THE WIND’S WHISPER
The emptiness inside me is devouring my soul.
The flames that heat my blood are burning out of my control.
The hole is getting deeper where I feel lost and defeat.
I feel like letting go of it, I feel I must retreat.
The stars no longer shine, instead they slowly fade away.
The motion of the ocean was but that of yesterday.
Everything is still, as if our time itself has died.
The sky is coloured bleak as if our sun has run to hide.
The tiny dark black threads are now in happiness’ place.
The earth that was once green now has a dreary, fouler face.
But even thought our joy has gone to be exchanged with hate,
To die without hope, love and faith is not that of our fate.
So fill the emptiness with love, embrace it in your soul.
Cool the flames that heat your blood, keep it in control.
Stitch the hole that deepens for the doubt you will defeat.
Holding on to your treasured life for darkness shall retreat.
The stars will shine so brightly that your shadows will fade away.
The serenity of our wondrous sea is washing out the day.
Celebrate and be not still, for suffering has now died.
The sky rejoices with deep still blue, dusk has run to hide.
Pain now flees along with sorrow; love is in its place.
The soft, fresh, green green earth now has a worldly face.
Joy is here and surrounds us all, eliminating all the hate.
For a beautiful world with love and bliss is but that of our fate.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 4 comments.


Kay... BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 5:11 pm
Kay... BRONZE, London, Other
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not accomplished when reaching the Destination, it is the journey that creates success.

Thank You very Much for your support....xxx

on Dec. 18 2011 at 1:30 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments

Wow! Great poem! A really inspiring message!

I happened to read the other comment, and I rather liked the title. I agree that there is a lot of imagery in the poem, really good imagery. Once again, excellent!


Kay... BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 7:15 am
Kay... BRONZE, London, Other
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not accomplished when reaching the Destination, it is the journey that creates success.

lool, thanks, i think im going to change the title to something else :)

Lacer GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 4:21 pm
Lacer GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The thing about philosophy is that it often runs dry when thought of so shallowly.

The poem is good. But the image I'm assuming you're trying to project isn't coming to me. I'm not hearing "the winds whisper"
I'm hearing a good message, but I'm assuming that you wanted an imagery attached with that, And the attachment won't open :3


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!