Hide From Time

October 5, 2011
By WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain


My dear love,

When was the last time that you wished upon a star?

When was the last time that you didn't have to care?



My dear love,

How long has it been since you held a hand,

And felt the love of that person flower inside you?



Let's run away tonight,

Play hide-and-seek with the world.

We'll hide ourselves from time,

Behind a curtain of our compassion.



And love forever under a moonlit sky...



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on Oct. 10 2011 at 5:32 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

Yea, my friend said she wished could hide from time too when she first read it. Thanks for the awesome feedback :)

on Oct. 10 2011 at 5:29 pm
soarlikeme23 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands" e.e. cummings

This is absolutely beautiful! I love it so much. I wish I could hide from time, there never seems to be enough of it.

on Oct. 10 2011 at 3:20 pm
xxtennis13xx SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Beautiful, touching, and relatable. Loved it!

on Oct. 9 2011 at 6:15 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

I really like this; it flows very well, and I like the repetion of "my dear love", it sounds so simple and so touching. Great job!

Could you please read some of my work (especially my poem "Deceit"), rate, and tell me what you think? I really need some constructive critisizm :)


on Oct. 9 2011 at 4:35 pm
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

"Let's run away tonight,

Play hide-and-seek with the world.

We'll hide ourselves from time,

Behind a curtain of our compassion."

I loved that!! :) You're a very good writer! :)


on Oct. 8 2011 at 7:11 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

Thanks for the awesome feedback

on Oct. 8 2011 at 6:46 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

agreed, just astounding. It made my heart flutter. I loved " Let it flow inside you."

on Oct. 8 2011 at 6:39 pm
billlover420 GOLD, Justin, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boy, when you're dead, they really fix you up. I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery.  People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody. ~J.D. Salinger,The Catcher in the Rye,

is is sooo good i love it <33

its soo simple yet every feelin is in there very good ur a very very talented writter :DD



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