Freedom

October 5, 2011
Let me fly,
Fly away today,
Don't call me back,
Don't leave me imprisoned,
Don't reign me in,
Just
Let
Me
Be
Free,
Freedom,
It's all I ask for,
One thing...
Is that to much? You are free why can't I be?





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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 6:55 pm
Short , cute , and emotionally beautiful. ****
 
Pretzel..Dream said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 5:59 pm
Thank you!
 
Limey said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 3:16 pm
Excelent. So much emotion in so few lines.
 
wilnerfive said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:55 pm

 

Love this! It applies to so many things....very nicely composed. Keep writing! :-)

 
Disappearing Dot said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 1:40 pm

Pretzel Dream has read my mind and

then has articulated it so clearly and

so beautifully.

 
Persistence said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 11:53 am
I love the last line. Perfect close to what the rest of it brings up.
 
GOGO said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 11:45 am
Thoughtful.  Meaningful.  So enjoyed this.
 
popcorn33 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 9:47 am
I love this.  So much feeling.
 
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