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Freedom

Let me fly,
Fly away today,
Don't call me back,
Don't leave me imprisoned,
Don't reign me in,
Just
Let
Me
Be
Free,
Freedom,
It's all I ask for,
One thing...
Is that to much? You are free why can't I be?



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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
Short , cute , and emotionally beautiful. ****
 
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Pretzel..DreamThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 5:59 pm:
Thank you!
 
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Limey said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 3:16 pm:
Excelent. So much emotion in so few lines.
 
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wilnerfive said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:55 pm:

 

Love this! It applies to so many things....very nicely composed. Keep writing! :-)

 
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Disappearing Dot said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 1:40 pm:

Pretzel Dream has read my mind and

then has articulated it so clearly and

so beautifully.

 
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Persistence said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 11:53 am:
I love the last line. Perfect close to what the rest of it brings up.
 
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GOGO said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 11:45 am:
Thoughtful.  Meaningful.  So enjoyed this.
 
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popcorn33 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 9:47 am:
I love this.  So much feeling.
 
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