Gods Destiny

September 28, 2011
By godsdestiny BRONZE, MAPLEWOOD, New Jersey
godsdestiny BRONZE, MAPLEWOOD, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"you can look from the past, look to the future, but have to look at whats in front of you to see where your going"


Its better to have loved and lost,
than not to have loved at all,
its great to watch a good thing grow,
but harder to see a better thing fall,
when we was suppose to pick it up,
why is it we dropped the ball,
why is it we were runnin' straight,
but didnt see the up and coming wall,
that caused our ways to seperate,
like a blockage,
i wish i would of saw this before,
would of done anything to stop this,
but my love for you,
i never truely lost it,
just dissolved into the dark abyss,
as everyone stood by to become a witness,
to have seen the greatest tragedy,
but to never be heard,
like taking away flight,
from a specialized bird,
even though god said for it not to be,
I'd wish he change his word.



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Alegra BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 8:32 am
Alegra BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If you can trust yourself when others are doubting you but give an allowance for their doubt then you will be worthy and most of all you will be a lady, my daughter. (original was a man,my son) Rudyard Kipling

This must be one of the very best poems i have evr read. Keep doing the good work!

on Oct. 8 2011 at 5:03 pm
godsdestiny BRONZE, MAPLEWOOD, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can look from the past, look to the future, but have to look at whats in front of you to see where your going"

thank you so very much for comenting on my poem it means so much to me! and to all of those whose read my poem as well ! thank you so very much

on Oct. 8 2011 at 4:10 pm
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am yours as long as you are mine."

"Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones."

"Your everything i want but nothing i need."
"I hate you so much ... i love you".

"Its the ugliest cute thing ever"!

"Everything is cute in its own way

In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

It was so passonaite and strong! It Was well written and thought out. Also speaks for many failed loves. 


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