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September 25, 2011
By Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .


Confused, is what I am,
Because You chose mine out of all the other plans.
You picked me up, with no intention of setting me down,
It's funny how we're always walking hand in hand.
I know You would never let me drown,
But I seem to just keep swimming down.

Down, Down, into the tunnel of sin,
But You still always ask if I can let You in.

I open the door and we share many happy moments,
But then he creeps in too,
It's Him, The Opponent.
He brings back those terrible memories of sinful desires that I think I cant resist,
So the Righteous Man walks out with tears on his lids.

I have a periodic moment of joy,
Before my opponent comes again to collect my Due.
They say whatever he giveth,
he taketh away from you.

So here I am, all broken and battered,
There's a knock on the door,
Hmmm so I still Flatter?
I open the door and to my surprise,
the Righteous Man is standing with Desire in His eyes.
With No Doubt, I bring Him in.

Now, My Life Is Whole Again.


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Logic BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2012 at 6:49 pm
Logic BRONZE, Hutchinson, Kansas
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You are an artist. Not with drawing or paintings but with words. Great Job!

on Mar. 5 2012 at 7:29 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

lol ! Thanks anyway : ) Hopefully it'll someday get to you. :D

on Mar. 5 2012 at 7:27 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Merci Beacoup ! : )

Will Do !


NickyJ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 2:22 pm
NickyJ BRONZE, Hyde Park, New York
1 article 0 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.” ~Robert Frost

I don't really get it, but it is written well. I particulary like the first and last stanza.

Great work though. Maybe if i keep reading it I'll understand it XD


on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:21 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

I really enjoyed the emotion you put into this poem. It really gave it deepth. Keep writing! (:

on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:09 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

thank you so much, im very happy you enjoyed it : )

on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:02 pm
xoSamanthaxo GOLD, New York, New York
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget all the rules. Forget about being published. Write for yourself and celebrate writing."
-Anonymous

This poem is inspiring. You paint with words. Throughout the poem you can really feel the emotion. I personally love it! You are talented!!

on Mar. 4 2012 at 7:55 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Thanks, i really appreciate it :)

on Feb. 29 2012 at 8:28 pm
Lovely_Me BRONZE, El Monte, California
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is nothing to fear in Life it is only to be understood.

I think your poem is awesome!! Keep on writting more I would really enjoy reading more of your work (:

on Feb. 8 2012 at 10:11 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Thanks! so are you!

on Feb. 8 2012 at 9:59 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

Awesome poem! It really speaks to me. you are very talented.

on Feb. 5 2012 at 9:28 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

No, Thank You for your awesome comment ! :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 12:12 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
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Beautifully Nice, when I can I'll be back to read this, thanks Ruthie for this Awesome emotional share !

on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:27 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Thank you ! :)

Xrisi BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:20 pm
Xrisi BRONZE, Wichta Falls, Texas
1 article 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere.-Joyce A. Myers
Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky.-Rabindranath

i like it! 5/5

on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:28 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Thank You ! :) . .Sure !

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:24 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Very relatable! Nice Job 5/5. Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?

on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:18 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

That's one of the nicest remarks EVER . . THANK YOUU ! :)

EEnriquez said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:12 pm
EEnriquez, Newark, New Jersey
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
This is the best piece of literature I've ever read.

on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:02 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Gracias ! ^_^


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