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September 25, 2011
By Stina58 BRONZE, Mounds View, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"In dreams, we enter a world that's entirely our own.", "It is our choices that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities."

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Cleansing everything it meets
Playing patterns in the streets
Whispered melodies from the sky
Thunderous harmonies from way up high
Caresses every leaf and flower
Holding such a glorious power
Its womb covering the sun like a saddened stain
I can’t help but love the rain

© Chuck K., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
My favorite weather is when it's raining. This came into my head one day when it was just drizzling. I only had the first two lines, but it took off through my head. I'm so happy I wrote it down!
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FangPoet DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 4:35 pm
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am yours as long as you are mine."

"Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones."

"Your everything i want but nothing i need."
"I hate you so much ... i love you".

"Its the ugliest cute thing ever"!

"Everything is cute in its own way

In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

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I too love the rain,and this poem.