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That night...

That night we met, I couldn't help but be attracted to you.
I felt something pulling me, like an invisible, magnetic field.
I couldn't help but come and talk to you, just to hear what you sound like.
I couldn't help but ask to dance with you, just to feel your hands on mines.
I couldn't help but ask to talk to you in private, just so I can learn more about you.
I couldn't help but to lean in for a kiss, hoping you might complete it.
To my surprise, I felt your lips against mines.
I just couldn't help... but fall in love with you... that night.



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josika said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:49 am:
so pretty! very beautifully written. 5/5 from me
 
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Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:37 am:
Beautiful wolf!!
 
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