The Curse Of Reality.

September 24, 2011
By MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.


Deliver me reality, Shining from your face.
Upon a golden platter, your place it takes.
The cries of a million, a voice portrays.
The laugh of a few, echoed whats erased.

You can call me a dreamer, my hopes too high.
A fool, a believer, eyes set on the prize.
You can say I'm madness, your ways in line.
A death, a sadness, to the lie i climb.


The author's comments:
Ignorence is peace.

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on Jan. 16 2012 at 5:39 pm
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you (: I think its just a matter of opinion about ignorence being peace or bliss, but yeah it can certainly be useful to block everything out sometimes. Thank you so much for the feedback :D

byebye said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 5:56 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Actually, I completely agree with what you said about ignorance. I always say "ignorance is bliss" and no one ever gets it....I rest my case.

on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:55 pm
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you! (: It means a lot to get feedback, especially that nice! Yeah, i just thought that people fight over such trivial things that if we were ignorent towards them then the world would be a better place. Also, the world can be painful, ignorence is a great way to escape even just for a moment (:

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:43 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

I really enjoyed the subtle rhyme, which I thought went well with the theme. I disagree with you that "ignorance is peace," but overall, the poem had a very lulling quality to it that I liked. Good job and keep writing!

on Nov. 12 2011 at 1:08 pm
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you! (: I will do!

on Nov. 9 2011 at 7:21 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

Hey, I love this and I know it could happen.  You're really good and I wish you the moon's shining luck!

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 6:43 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Really beautiful and well done!

Check out my work sometime?


on Nov. 8 2011 at 1:09 pm
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you! (: You have no idea how much that means to me! I will try! (:

on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:18 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

Yeah, when I read this, it really had a musical soul to it.  I wish I am able to do that and I just thought I should tell you.  I know you can do it!

on Oct. 27 2011 at 7:58 am
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you! (: will do :D

on Oct. 27 2011 at 7:58 am
MarieLouiseA SILVER, Newmarket, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's Impossible, The world is your dream.
In your eyes, the sky's a different blue.

Thank you so much! (: i did put a few chords with it but i couldnt think of a way to continue haha :D thanks so much (:

on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:38 am
Chibi-Alexis PLATINUM, Haw River, North Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, No no, I sell em for a dollar, They're worth so much more, After I'm a gonner, And maybe then you'll hear the words I been singin, Funny when you're dead how people start listenin."
The Band Perry
If I Die Young

If you put music in it and add a couple other verses, it would be a beautiful song.  I love this!

Jeera SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 7:39 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Stay strong; be real.

This is really good! I like it :)

You could check out some of my stuff if you'd like :) Keep writing!!!



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