Loneliness

September 30, 2011
By boomawang63 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
boomawang63 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Loneliness is a Longing.
A cold, calm killer.
Standing still and silent,
Living rested on an elbow by a window,
Leaving tear-stained cuts,
And a ragged, empty hole in the heart.



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on Oct. 7 2011 at 7:51 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis

I loveloveloved this! Sooo deep, meaningful, and unique point of view. Keep up the good work, kid! :DD

on Oct. 7 2011 at 5:32 pm
rachelwilson SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I went thirty minutes without seeing something of remebrance to you.. but then again,.. my eyes were closed.." -Rachel Wilson

This is a really pretty peice. So indepth and i can picture your words.

on Oct. 7 2011 at 1:37 pm
KikiJones BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“There were things I wanted to tell him but I knew they would hurt him. So I buried them and let them hurt me.”


Jonathan Safran Foer
And

"Words are like a gun, keep them on safety if you're not ready for the consequences of hurting someone. "

This is really deep And painted vivid pictures from within your words.

on Oct. 6 2011 at 6:38 am
MerelyMistaken BRONZE, Oaklyn, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"What happened to love?, in the first stage. We left that when we wanted more..." -Avi Buffalo

This reminds me of my own pain... Endured in the dead of last winter.

on Oct. 6 2011 at 12:05 am
ShortStuffKari SILVER, Burlington, Washington
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how very true.


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