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Loneliness

Loneliness is a Longing.
A cold, calm killer.
Standing still and silent,
Living rested on an elbow by a window,
Leaving tear-stained cuts,
And a ragged, empty hole in the heart.



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rachelwilson said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm:
This is a really pretty peice. So indepth and i can picture your words.
 
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Oct. 7, 2011 at 7:51 pm :
I loveloveloved this! Sooo deep, meaningful, and unique point of view. Keep up the good work, kid! :DD
 
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KikiJones said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 1:37 pm:
This is really deep And painted vivid pictures from within your words.
 
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MerelyMistaken said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 6:38 am:
This reminds me of my own pain... Endured in the dead of last winter.
 
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ShortStuffKari said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 12:05 am:
how very true.
 
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