September 30, 2011
Loneliness is a Longing.
A cold, calm killer.
Standing still and silent,
Living rested on an elbow by a window,
Leaving tear-stained cuts,
And a ragged, empty hole in the heart.

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rachelwilson said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm
This is a really pretty peice. So indepth and i can picture your words.
OfMuchHappiness This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 7:51 pm
I loveloveloved this! Sooo deep, meaningful, and unique point of view. Keep up the good work, kid! :DD
KikiJones said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 1:37 pm
This is really deep And painted vivid pictures from within your words.
MerelyMistaken said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 6:38 am
This reminds me of my own pain... Endured in the dead of last winter.
ShortStuffKari said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 12:05 am
how very true.
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