September 12, 2011
I saved someone from the fiery depths.
I held a hand through the black dust.
I pulled someone from near death.
I bore the weight of public trust.

I led the way to freedom.
I stopped the evil criminal.
I beheld the scenes so gruesome.
I was the silent sentinel.

People said I had strength of will.
But I am by no means a hero.
Heroes are left behind, laying still.
When I leave, they cannot follow.

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Annette11 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Wow, that was great! I agree the last stanza is the best. I wish it were a little longer though so we could fully understand the message.
savetheplanet replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Thanks Annette! I appreciate the comments. You should read my poem Lucy. It's my best one I think.
pinkowl said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 10:45 pm
dannnnnnng, this is awesome!
savetheplanet replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 10:57 pm
Thanks! I like the last stanza the best. XD
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