September 27, 2011
By FatherDagon GOLD, SpringHill, Tennessee
FatherDagon GOLD, SpringHill, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not going to tell you how to live your life, but I am going to suggest how you should.

I succumbed to my own desires so I fell,
And fell very far down to the fire,
It burns, it hurts I can’t see any more I have become blind,
I can no longer speak for my tongue has been cut and my mouth sewn shut,
Blood rains from the clouds like rain,
Screams echo through endless caverns like voices in my head,
“O lord please save me!”
“A request I cannot grant from the sins you’ve made”
Needles that look like daggers are what I fell on,
It all hurts,
I hear the swirling of a vortex yet I know not what it is,
To fall here is sinner’s paradise,
Where light is not welcome here,
Were the poor have no charity,
Were I forever lay and grieve,
Had I not known suicide was a sin I wouldn’t have succumbed,
I climb the mountain of Damnation because I saw light,
It was only a trick placed by the cruel master,
“Ring around the Rosie”
Fire is above me as I fall,
“Pocketful of Posies”,
Roses are black and spotted in my dry tear s that my skin weeps,
“Ashes, Ashes”
I fell into the pit and silenced my mouth,
“We all fall down.”

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peaceout GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2011 at 7:26 pm
peaceout GOLD, Cleveland, Ohio
17 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't ask what the meaning of life is. You define it.

amazing. the last line gave me goosebumps too. this is beautiful

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