Left to die

September 23, 2011
By Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you


I wake up and sigh. Tears flow down my cheek and onto my shirt as I remember what happened. Everyday my heart breaks piece by piece and its so close to shattering. When I think of you it only makes it break more and only brings me closer to my death. I know I cant stand to live without you so its a question how I lasted this long.
I finally saw who you were when you left me broken and stranded. No one to lean on and no one to tell me it will be okay.
You were a monster but I loved you.



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on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:12 am
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where."
-James Clavell, "Shogun"

Good job! I can tell you think a lot about catastrophe, and moving on, etc...could you read my poem "A Poem from Planet Mars"? It kind of deals with the same thing. Thanks.

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:41 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

i will look at it right now:)

 


on Nov. 12 2011 at 12:18 pm
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you

Never Alone is another..its my most recent one. Thanks ahead of time

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 6:49 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

are there any more you want me to check out? and give feedback on?

 


on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:42 pm
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you

Okay thank you very much! Ill check it out

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:50 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

why us? is one of them but the other ones are pending so it might be awhile. please give feedback? i hope you really like it.

on Nov. 9 2011 at 6:31 pm
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you

Whats the name of some of your poems

on Nov. 1 2011 at 8:32 pm
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you

Thank you. I will take a look at your poems

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 8:06 pm
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

awhh this is good. check out some of my poems..i kinda write some things about moving on and some you might relate to. i like this though.

on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:05 pm
Smiley1068 SILVER, Capitola, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone control you

Thank you for the advice. Im working on improving my writing and anything helps

on Oct. 18 2011 at 7:15 pm
smileyface96 BRONZE, Tifton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"To die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan

Maybe re-word it to convey the certain emotion you want. Like come at it from a different angle and light. But otherwise, It was splendid :) 


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