Left to die

September 23, 2011
I wake up and sigh. Tears flow down my cheek and onto my shirt as I remember what happened. Everyday my heart breaks piece by piece and its so close to shattering. When I think of you it only makes it break more and only brings me closer to my death. I know I cant stand to live without you so its a question how I lasted this long.
I finally saw who you were when you left me broken and stranded. No one to lean on and no one to tell me it will be okay.
You were a monster but I loved you.

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AgentOrange789 said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 9:12 am
Good job! I can tell you think a lot about catastrophe, and moving on, etc...could you read my poem "A Poem from Planet Mars"? It kind of deals with the same thing. Thanks.
bubbles.. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 8:06 pm
awhh this is good. check out some of my poems..i kinda write some things about moving on and some you might relate to. i like this though.
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 8:32 pm
Thank you. I will take a look at your poems
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 6:31 pm
Whats the name of some of your poems
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 6:50 am
why us? is one of them but the other ones are pending so it might be awhile. please give feedback? i hope you really like it.
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 6:42 pm
Okay thank you very much! Ill check it out
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 6:49 am

are there any more you want me to check out? and give feedback on?


Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 12:18 pm
Never Alone is another..its my most recent one. Thanks ahead of time
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:41 am

i will look at it right now:)


smileyface96 said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 7:15 pm
Maybe re-word it to convey the certain emotion you want. Like come at it from a different angle and light. But otherwise, It was splendid :) 
Alekanekalia replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 2:05 pm
Thank you for the advice. Im working on improving my writing and anything helps
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