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Left to die

I wake up and sigh. Tears flow down my cheek and onto my shirt as I remember what happened. Everyday my heart breaks piece by piece and its so close to shattering. When I think of you it only makes it break more and only brings me closer to my death. I know I cant stand to live without you so its a question how I lasted this long.
I finally saw who you were when you left me broken and stranded. No one to lean on and no one to tell me it will be okay.
You were a monster but I loved you.



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AgentOrange789 said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 9:12 am:
Good job! I can tell you think a lot about catastrophe, and moving on, etc...could you read my poem "A Poem from Planet Mars"? It kind of deals with the same thing. Thanks.
 
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bubbles.. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 8:06 pm:
awhh this is good. check out some of my poems..i kinda write some things about moving on and some you might relate to. i like this though.
 
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 8:32 pm :
Thank you. I will take a look at your poems
 
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 6:31 pm :
Whats the name of some of your poems
 
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 6:50 am :
why us? is one of them but the other ones are pending so it might be awhile. please give feedback? i hope you really like it.
 
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 6:42 pm :
Okay thank you very much! Ill check it out
 
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 6:49 am :

are there any more you want me to check out? and give feedback on?

 

 
Smiley1068 replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 12:18 pm :
Never Alone is another..its my most recent one. Thanks ahead of time
 
bubbles.. replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:41 am :

i will look at it right now:)

 

 
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smileyface96 said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 7:15 pm:
Maybe re-word it to convey the certain emotion you want. Like come at it from a different angle and light. But otherwise, It was splendid :) 
 
Alekanekalia replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 2:05 pm :
Thank you for the advice. Im working on improving my writing and anything helps
 
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