im my own worst enemy

September 14, 2011
life is so depressing
darkness covers my enemies
their intentions are not good
they never are
they only have one goal
stab you in the back
then watch you bleed
dying slowly
they love to watch me
they laugh as i fall
mocking me as i fight to get back up
telling me ill never make it
lacking understanding
no one knows
my worst enemy
is me

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smileyface96 said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 7:33 pm
Classic meaning, and an excellent one at that! :) But maybe re-wording to add some more flow or different adjectives to spice it up? But its still wonderful! Stop by and look at my poetry sometimes? Id greatly appreciate some feedback! Have a nice day and keep it up! :) 
fallen_angel420 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 7:43 am
thanks for your feedback, ill edit it and re post it , keep checking my page and see if you like what i do with it.
fallen_angel420 replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 7:48 am
you should also check some more of  my work out
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