im my own worst enemy

September 14, 2011
By fallen_angel420 PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
fallen_angel420 PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
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It has been said, ‘time heals all wounds.’ I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind, protecting its sanity, covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens. But it is never gone.


life is so depressing
darkness covers my enemies
their intentions are not good
they never are
they only have one goal
stab you in the back
then watch you bleed
dying slowly
suffering
they love to watch me
they laugh as i fall
mocking me as i fight to get back up
telling me ill never make it
lacking understanding
no one knows
my worst enemy
is me



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on Oct. 24 2011 at 7:48 am
fallen_angel420 PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
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It has been said, ‘time heals all wounds.’ I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind, protecting its sanity, covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens. But it is never gone.

you should also check some more of  my work out

on Oct. 24 2011 at 7:43 am
fallen_angel420 PLATINUM, Centerville, Ohio
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It has been said, ‘time heals all wounds.’ I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind, protecting its sanity, covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens. But it is never gone.

thanks for your feedback, ill edit it and re post it , keep checking my page and see if you like what i do with it.

on Oct. 18 2011 at 7:33 pm
smileyface96 BRONZE, Tifton, Georgia
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"To die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan

Classic meaning, and an excellent one at that! :) But maybe re-wording to add some more flow or different adjectives to spice it up? But its still wonderful! Stop by and look at my poetry sometimes? Id greatly appreciate some feedback! Have a nice day and keep it up! :) 




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