The One Thing We Know

September 29, 2011
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder


These last couple weeks
Have been pretty rough.
The fighting, the jealousy,
And the breakup were tough.

But through all of it,
Our friendship remained.
This friendship's forever
Pure, can't be stained.

You'll be there for me,
And I'll be there for you.
It's not even a question,
We both know it's true.

You know when you're hurt,
I'll be there to care.
And times when your happy,
Your joy I will share.

In the back of my mind
A dream'll be there through time,
Of having your love again
And your lips upon mine.

And whether that happen
Or whether it not,
I'll be falling for you
Til in your arms I'm caught.

The one thing I do know
Til time comes to an end,
Is no matter what happens,
You'll be my best friend.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for a guy right after we had broken up after some stupid drama... luckily we are still best friends and very close to dating again =)

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on Oct. 21 2011 at 12:28 pm
ArtFanatic1695 SILVER, Wheeler, Texas
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Very Beautifull and amazing i love it. Check out some of my work if you would like. :P :D :)

 


Little.Miss said...
on Oct. 20 2011 at 11:49 am
This is really good! :)

on Oct. 17 2011 at 7:44 pm
GigglyAmbar SILVER, Washington, District Of Columbia
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This is so sweet and well written! Im glad you too still are friends, that's really rare

on Oct. 17 2011 at 6:03 pm
AbstractFragment GOLD, Dalmatia,, Pennsylvania
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"You know what it feels like when all your teeth are falling out really slowly and you don't realize and then you notice that, well, they're really far apart. And then one day... you don't have any teeth anymore." - Where the Wild Things Are

Very nice although it had its share of quirks. For one I love your use of selectivly ryhming only a couple lines in a stanza. I told someone else that this is a easy and effective way to creative emphasis. I feel however for what you were trying to do that perhaps if you branched out from the standard 4-4-4-4 lines it would have a prettier flow. You have great potential.

on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:40 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

I love this! Beautiful!

Pay-Pay said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 10:09 am
You go giiirrrrrl :)

Me-Me said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 10:09 am
This is great! I love it! :)

Ayme. said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 8:18 am
beautiful writing!

Nofie GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 11:23 pm
Nofie GOLD, Jericho, New York
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This is absolutely amazing. Its kind of where my life is at the moment. I love poems that literally take the words right out of your mouth :) great job!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 3:33 pm
mariahdances GOLD, Torrance, California
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"The most important thing in a conversation is to hear what isn't being said"

This is beautiful:)


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