September 27, 2011
By just_me95 BRONZE, Crescent City California, California
just_me95 BRONZE, Crescent City California, California
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Favorite Quote:
"dare i ask?... dare you assume?"

over the years
what have you learned?
what were you saying
when my back was turned?
how was your life
when I wasn't around?
was there someone else
who had your heart bound?
are my soft lips
the only ones you've touched?
or was my kiss
not nearly enough?
did you really think
that I didn't know?
you made it obvious
when you left me alone
now you are back
asking for one more try
all I have to say
is sorry, but Good-Bye

The author's comments:
don't you love feeling heart broken and bored at the same time? well writing is my way of coping, so why not share it with the world?

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peaceout GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2011 at 7:01 pm
peaceout GOLD, Cleveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Don't ask what the meaning of life is. You define it.

LOVE this kind of poetry!! Great job, really deep!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:23 am
i said goodbye two once, i loved that goldfish. i felt the same. when swimmy asked me for a second chance i knew i couldnt take it again. i never got another fish again! we relate so well.

on Oct. 2 2011 at 8:18 pm
Posion.Ivyy. BRONZE, Spring Valley, New York
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I like your word use ; it all flows really good.

on Oct. 2 2011 at 6:30 pm
alirb0713 BRONZE, Swellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Friendship is when people know all about you, but like you anyway

I really like the peom but the end needs a tiny work 

on Oct. 2 2011 at 12:59 pm
hiddenbehindmyeyes BRONZE, Enola, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"They say loving you gives pain is full of sacrifies but i'd rather have alot of pain and many sacrifies then to not be loved by you."

I love this! Its written simply but with so much meaning behind the words. I'm sorry about the heartbreak :/ what can i say life sucks, keep up the writing, your great at it :)

on Oct. 1 2011 at 8:40 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
22 articles 10 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Is that when you get you're thinger off you're thinger?"-Eric Stopper

your poem is very easy to relate to, I love it! :)

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