September 27, 2011
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over the years
what have you learned?
what were you saying
when my back was turned?
how was your life
when I wasn't around?
was there someone else
who had your heart bound?
are my soft lips
the only ones you've touched?
or was my kiss
not nearly enough?
did you really think
that I didn't know?
you made it obvious
when you left me alone
now you are back
asking for one more try
all I have to say
is sorry, but Good-Bye

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peaceout said...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 7:01 pm
LOVE this kind of poetry!! Great job, really deep!
i miss swimmy said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:23 am
i said goodbye two once, i loved that goldfish. i felt the same. when swimmy asked me for a second chance i knew i couldnt take it again. i never got another fish again! we relate so well.
Posion.Ivyy. said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 8:18 pm
I like your word use ; it all flows really good.
alirb0713 said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 6:30 pm
I really like the peom but the end needs a tiny work 
Peaceandloveforever said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 12:59 pm
I love this! Its written simply but with so much meaning behind the words. I'm sorry about the heartbreak :/ what can i say life sucks, keep up the writing, your great at it :)
14hipkri said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 8:40 pm
your poem is very easy to relate to, I love it! :)
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