never let go

September 29, 2011
By MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back -myself


Theres a strange feeling

hidden inside my heart

Theres a stored up

emotion in my soul



I crave for love

no matter how hard

I long eagerly for love

even though it hurts



I'll wait for you

though it takes so many nights

I'll save my last breath

untill the sun refuses to shine its light



I want you to know

I need you to know

that you're the one i can never let go



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on Oct. 2 2011 at 9:02 pm
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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Thanks! It's much appreciated! :D

on Oct. 2 2011 at 8:40 pm
MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back -myself

yeah sure, will do :)

on Oct. 2 2011 at 8:51 am
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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I re-read it and now that I see where you're going with this, I like it! The irregularity is nice and really fits the mood of the poem. Great job and keep it up! Would you be willing to check out some of my poetry? I use irregular rhythms too. :)

on Oct. 2 2011 at 6:51 am
MugginsSachett GOLD, Wasilla, Alaska
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back -myself

thank you. and i know that thanks, it wasnt supposed to have a perfect rhythem.

on Oct. 1 2011 at 6:51 am
Libra97 PLATINUM, Salem, Oregon
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Loved the last line! It just sounded so right for that place. Just remember that poetry doesn't always have to rhyme! I feel that the rythm was a little off due to it.




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