I believed you

September 28, 2011
I believed what you said,
Because you started to cry,
But now I feel stupid,
What you said was a lie.
But thanks for teaching me,
Now I realize,
Anyone can water,
Their deceiving eyes.





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lighteningthief3 said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 9:11 pm
I really like the ending, I felt it was really powerful, but the only weak part was at the beginning, in the word "because", it interrupts the flow just a little bit, but other than that I really enjoyed this poem.
 
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