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theres a locked door
it troubles me to be so close
to never know what lays behind
one day i will go in
i will know the secret




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EmoAngel18 said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 3:45 pm:
I loved ur poems, ive read all of them. just wondering when u get some time can u plz check my poems out and tell me what u think.
 
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mrsenesitive said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 10:06 am:
thanks it was longer but i shortened it 
 
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MeaghanSeesStars This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 8:36 am:
I like this one better than "sadness"though wouldn't it be "beyond the locked door"not "behind"? I think beyond sounds better. I especially like the last two lines.  I think you could have made it longer, explained to us more. Is this a physical door? Or is it a metaphor for something. Good poem.
 
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mrsenesitive said...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 10:11 am:
do you like my other ones ill check you out soon lol
 
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countrygirl98 said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 8:50 pm:

I like this.

Keep writing! 

Please check me out :)

 
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Gwgideon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
Enjoyed this a lot, especially lines two and three! 
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 10:35 am :
thanks gorgeous
 
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