locked door

September 23, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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theres a locked door
it troubles me to be so close
to never know what lays behind
one day i will go in
i will know the secret

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on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:45 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

I loved ur poems, ive read all of them. just wondering when u get some time can u plz check my poems out and tell me what u think.

on Dec. 9 2011 at 10:35 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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thanks gorgeous

on Oct. 6 2011 at 10:06 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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thanks it was longer but i shortened it 

on Oct. 6 2011 at 8:36 am
Amsterdamsel DIAMOND, Henderson , Nevada
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I like this one better than "sadness"though wouldn't it be "beyond the locked door"not "behind"? I think beyond sounds better. I especially like the last two lines.  I think you could have made it longer, explained to us more. Is this a physical door? Or is it a metaphor for something. Good poem.

on Oct. 4 2011 at 10:11 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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do you like my other ones ill check you out soon lol

on Oct. 3 2011 at 8:50 pm
countrygirl98 BRONZE, Greenville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
If something ended, Don't be sad. Just simply turn the page because you never know what's awaiting in the next chapter <3

I like this.

Keep writing! 

Please check me out :)


Gwgideon GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 5:30 pm
Gwgideon GOLD, Commerce Twp, Michigan
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Enjoyed this a lot, especially lines two and three! 


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