Falling In

September 22, 2011
By Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.


Falling in, with the falling wind.
Motionless, heavy raining bliss.

Angels fly fast, reminders of the past,
Learning to become one;

Steadfast, this will last.
Never forget;

All as one, this has become,
Our never ending love;



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on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:52 pm
xxtennis13xx SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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yeah, for sure! It is definitely unique!

on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:42 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
11 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

There isn't really a meaning, more of a habit. I started writing on my cell phone and used it to distinguish stanzas.. I just kept it.. It makes them different, I guess. If you know what I mean?

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:03 pm
xxtennis13xx SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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I love the length; you have a real talent to use such precise diction and really get the point across in a short poem. This really is awesome! I don't understand your endings with a semicolon though...there are a lot of grammar websites that are really specific about semicolon use, is you're unsure look it up! (I really hope that didn't sound mean. I understand some writers just do things like that sometimes, it just doesn't make sense to me with this poem.) (:

on Nov. 21 2011 at 11:18 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
11 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

Again, thank you very much!! :) I don't know if it was you that rated it, but if it was, I appreciate it!! :DD

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 8:43 am
Ella1 GOLD,
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Not at all, I think you were able to get your meaning across nicely in a short poem. Great job!

on Nov. 18 2011 at 11:24 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
11 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

Thank you so much! :) I kind of felt that how short it was might have taken away from it :/

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 5:34 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
This is a beautiful peom




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