You Were My Everything

September 26, 2011
By teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Be optimistic, Be open minded, just let that light shine through you"

~Shannon Nicole~ (ORIGINAL)


Your brown eyes your bright smile..
I thought you'd be around for quite a while..

I never thought I would fall so fast..
I thought our LOVE would really last.

You said "I'll love you with all my heart..
I said " I'll love you with every second that i've got.
You said "Never let me go"
I said "Baby you already know I won't.

It's funny how things change..
Now nothing feels the same...
We spent every day together..
Now we are separated forever..

You had me at hello...
Then we said good-bye
I always ask myself why

You were this one thing
Baby you were My Everything

The author's comments:
I lost the boy I fell in love with

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on Sep. 28 2011 at 2:52 pm
teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Be optimistic, Be open minded, just let that light shine through you"

~Shannon Nicole~ (ORIGINAL)

Yea we broke up because of vicious rumors that he believed over me.  Thankk youuuu :)

on Sep. 27 2011 at 5:59 pm
ShadowRose SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"This was because she knew few words and believed in none,
and in the world she was rather silent, contributing just her share of urbane humor with a precision that approached meagreness." -F. Scott Fitzgerald

Very good. (: I love it.

on Sep. 27 2011 at 2:51 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

This is very good, and it reminds me of a poem I wrote called Goodbye For Now. But in my poem, the dude dies, and Im not sure if thats what happens to your guy? Or did you break up, or something? Anyways, this is very good!


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