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Judgemental

In the superior eyes of the many knows,
I believe they have a very large nose.
For they will smell before they will see,
And they will see before they will know me.




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eliana924This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 12:58 pm:
I like how you used such concise language to capture such a big topic. My one suggestion is to change "the many knows" to something more clear or maybe just add a hyphen.
 
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