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Lonely Shadow

The nightmare you built to escape,
Fallen victim to your own fate.
Finding bliss in silence,
The heart of stone is your sixth sense;

Pain too great to tell,
With your lies you fail to know.
I’m the only one who sees,
Behind the mask, you’ll never show;

Malice is your joy,
And my heart was the one destroyed.
Revealing the path it was all a game,
Now knowing that she is the one to blame;



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NevershineThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:22 pm:
Color me impressed
 
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zadiekatie23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 12:56 pm:
It's very mysterious in that it's all very vague, yet very vivid with, like Acastillo said, its great words. Thanks!
 
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AcastilloThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 7:16 pm:
Wow, its very beautiful. I liked your word choice!
 
Paramour13 replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 10:00 pm :
Wow, thank you so much!! :)
 
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