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My Lovely Prince

September 16, 2011
By fuhscinating BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
fuhscinating BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Life will take you places, you just have to go with it." -Me.


Alone in this world, I sit in the dark.
With no one to hold, with no one to love.
But still I try to live it alone.
I live alone in this freezing world.

Everyday I sat here, this very spot.
No one notices, I cry silently.
But a young man appeared and sat next to me.
I stared at him, my lovely prince.

He smiled and asked why I'm alone.
I shrugged and he grabbed my hand.
"You're hands are cold." he said.
I closed my eyes and fell asleep in his arms.

That morning I woke up, he was about to leave.
I looked down at my feet, "wait for me!"
He vanished into thin air and from then I saw.
My lovely prince never existed.


The author's comments:
Sitting in the library with the computer turned on. Said "hey, why don't I write a poem?"

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Kate298 SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 3:03 pm
Kate298 SILVER, Syracuse, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You can't have a signal in the sky, but I'll be your hero.

I loved that :)

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 6:14 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Not bad, I particularly liked the end. Do you think that maybe you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies? Please?