Too Much

September 16, 2011
By leaveastorybehind SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
leaveastorybehind SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way out is through."

I like Life. In
fact, I think I
like Life too
much. Or rather,
I like too much

Most people only
like too much Life
in their lives.
Forcing a baby
out of your womb,
they say,
is enough Life
for a lifetime.

What do they know?

If I could, I would
give birth every
single day. I
would break my
bones every
single night. I
would speak new
languages to
new boys whom
I would kiss
in new ways.

And I would stare
at the sun
until it had
to turn away.

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on Sep. 25 2011 at 2:55 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This was very complex and interesting. The first stanza is a bit confusing, but the last two stanzas ROCKED! In some places the line breaks could be confusing, perhaps lengthening the lines would help. I liked it!

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