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Winter is the season for which you bundle up warm
Where the snow falls in powdery flakes
Winter is the time for snowmen
And visiting relatives
It is where water freezes
Winter is the time for presents
Where the frost nips harshly at your skin
The exact opposite of Summer
Where everything is dead and broken
Winter is the time to mend relationships
The most romantic time of the year
Its the season for jeans and heavy jackets
And to make promises to the one you love
Winter is a season that occurs every year
It is harsh and unyielding
Winter is a lesson




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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 7:14 pm:

Don't be that harsh; a lot of your imagery is really nice, and I like the feel of your poem. Sometimes it doesn't flow too well, but that is fixable with some revising. Put some more work into it, and you'll be able to say "I think it's good!"

Could you please read my poem "Deceit" and tell me what you think... I desperately need feedback on it.

 
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