Winter

September 16, 2011
By GothicVampire BRONZE, Babson Park, Florida
GothicVampire BRONZE, Babson Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Forever Mine"


Winter is the season for which you bundle up warm
Where the snow falls in powdery flakes
Winter is the time for snowmen
And visiting relatives
It is where water freezes
Winter is the time for presents
Where the frost nips harshly at your skin
The exact opposite of Summer
Where everything is dead and broken
Winter is the time to mend relationships
The most romantic time of the year
Its the season for jeans and heavy jackets
And to make promises to the one you love
Winter is a season that occurs every year
It is harsh and unyielding
Winter is a lesson

The author's comments:
Something that came to me on the school bus. I dont think it is any good, but I decided to post it.

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on Sep. 24 2011 at 7:14 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

Don't be that harsh; a lot of your imagery is really nice, and I like the feel of your poem. Sometimes it doesn't flow too well, but that is fixable with some revising. Put some more work into it, and you'll be able to say "I think it's good!"

Could you please read my poem "Deceit" and tell me what you think... I desperately need feedback on it.





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