trapped in your web of lies

September 14, 2011
By Anonymous

This hurt can come to a surprise that every night I think you lie I lie awake, and twist in confusion .I hurt with thoughts my mind is lost I need the truth to be set free the thought of trusting u, and keeping my promises is hurting me. I depressed myself every day, every hour, every second there Is no break I tell myself over and over its not to late but I am trapped in your web of lies .To see the truth is behind closed doors that I can tell you will never reveal to me.

The author's comments:
what inspired was edgar allen poe i love his work of poetry

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on Sep. 26 2011 at 7:44 am
sweetgirl15 BRONZE, Siler City,nc, North Carolina
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thanks for commenting on my poetry

on Sep. 26 2011 at 7:43 am
sweetgirl15 BRONZE, Siler City,nc, North Carolina
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thanks for commenting on poetry and i will check out your work

on Sep. 23 2011 at 1:40 pm
Bubblesz BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I Really Agree with thatt!!

on Sep. 22 2011 at 4:24 pm
Leapdaybaby212 GOLD, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If you´re lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don't change.”
― Taylor Swift

Wow this is really good! check out some of my work please :)

Mrs.parez said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 12:54 pm
this poem tells alot about a person...when someone tells so many lies thery or you can get caught in them and eventullay they will come out...lieing is like eating when you do to much of it you fill like you are about to burst

The.Peahen said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 4:40 pm
The.Peahen, Holland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm telling you there's an enemy that would like to attack America, Americans, again. There just is. That's the reality of the world. And I wish him all the very best." --George W. Bush, Washington, D.C., Jan. 12, 2009

I loved it, though may be change the lay out. I really like Edgar Allan Poe too.


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