Nearly Broekn Heart

September 1, 2011
By music_man748 PLATINUM, Monett, Missouri
music_man748 PLATINUM, Monett, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To fully understand living, we must first live in full understanding." J-Moore


Laying here awake,
with nothing but the dark,
tear streaks down my cheeks,
and a nearly broken heart,
I am at a loss for what to do,
and how to make this work,
all I really know,
is that this girl is my world,
the thought of losing her,
is something I can not take,
and any time I've hurt her,
was my biggest mistake,
I just want her back,
to be able to call her mine,
and I don't know what I'm after,
I just need a sign,
but for now it's just the heart break,
as I lay here in the dark,
listening to the rhythm,
of my nearly broken heart...

The author's comments:
My girlfriend and I were having a lot of problems at the time... All I wanted was to work things out with her... she didn't feel quite the same at the time...

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on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:57 am
music_man748 PLATINUM, Monett, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To fully understand living, we must first live in full understanding." J-Moore

I tried to post this before but I don't think it worked. Thank you for the comment. I made me feel a lot better, and you to this day stand as the only person to comment on any of my stuff.

on Sep. 15 2011 at 7:35 pm
classicStara PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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beautifully put. This was heartwarming and perfectly understandable. lol, i feel like my bf feels like this too, so I guess I now i have a view of how he feels like when we fight. LOVE THE PIECE


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